Love the way you can just look at the rightmost bodies in the characters section and immediately understand almost everything about the character. Keep it up!
Well, since Linchpin just ended. Are you gonna continue with Alt Linchpin? It was even hinted in the first series. Really hoping this gets the development it deserves.
You know, your very good with a conflict driven story such as this. If you do start again on this body story, it doesnt have to be more of the same. I mean like in Linchpin it was a guy that woke up as him female self, so aside from gender not much would have changed, but in alt it's some guy waking up as some other girls body so you'd have all the same things as before, but it would be much harder for both party's involved. Not just they're gender and life around them would change, but everything would change like they're sense of taste, smell, they'd have the others weaknesses such as allergies, maybe one is left handed and the other right and that remains. basically they'll be forced not only to live the other's life, but also like the foods, smells and many of the things they the other does, watch out for the others weaknesses while being free of some of there own. I don't know why I've never seen this kind of thing in a body swap tale before, but it would be awesome to see it done.
Could go as far as simple mental issues too, like if one is dyslexic, or has adhd or insomnia, or even ocd. With them swaping souls/ memorys experiences, those issues would be in they're brain so not only would they have the brain of the opposite sex like last time, but the brain of someone else, though that may be taking it a bit far. Your the writer, and a good one at that what you do with my ideas, I'll leave up to you.
Love the way you can just look at the rightmost bodies in the characters section and immediately understand almost everything about the character. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteYeah same I'm not into shemales though, but I like how you made it so the only one in the story is the villain.
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Well, since Linchpin just ended. Are you gonna continue Alt Linchpin? Really hoping this series develop as well..
ReplyDeleteWell, since Linchpin just ended. Are you gonna continue with Alt Linchpin? It was even hinted in the first series. Really hoping this gets the development it deserves.
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ReplyDeleteYou know, your very good with a conflict driven story such as this. If you do start again on this body story, it doesnt have to be more of the same. I mean like in Linchpin it was a guy that woke up as him female self, so aside from gender not much would have changed, but in alt it's some guy waking up as some other girls body so you'd have all the same things as before, but it would be much harder for both party's involved. Not just they're gender and life around them would change, but everything would change like they're sense of taste, smell, they'd have the others weaknesses such as allergies, maybe one is left handed and the other right and that remains. basically they'll be forced not only to live the other's life, but also like the foods, smells and many of the things they the other does, watch out for the others weaknesses while being free of some of there own. I don't know why I've never seen this kind of thing in a body swap tale before, but it would be awesome to see it done.
ReplyDeleteCould go as far as simple mental issues too, like if one is dyslexic, or has adhd or insomnia, or even ocd. With them swaping souls/ memorys experiences, those issues would be in they're brain so not only would they have the brain of the opposite sex like last time, but the brain of someone else, though that may be taking it a bit far. Your the writer, and a good one at that what you do with my ideas, I'll leave up to you.
ReplyDeleteLol if you choose to use my ideas at all.
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